Hi Angeni, I like that use used the hollyhock's perspective for your poem. Your last sentence is great. Amazing use of words and questions. Keep it up genie!!
I like the line that said "We've been watching you all along." It's very poetic. Also, there is a lot of asking in the poem, it adds variety to the poem. Great work!
Hai :) you did really well by writing the poem in a way that shows the hollyhocks are constantly influencing Bill's actions and thoughts. The meaning of the poem is really clear. Good job!
Awesome Angeni! I like the tone and mood you've created. I think lots of people who wrote the poem in the perspective of the hollyhocks, including me, portrayed them as the "evil voices" that influnced Bill's actions and thoughts. And I agree with Winny that you've done a great job in portraying the theme. Well done!! -J.H
My god, you are a master of poetry, indeed. I applaud you. I like how you wrote from the perspective of the hollyhocks and you did it so well. Brilliant job. C.M
Hi Angeni,
ReplyDeleteI like that use used the hollyhock's perspective for your poem. Your last sentence is great. Amazing use of words and questions. Keep it up genie!!
MK
I like the line that said "We've been watching you all along." It's very poetic.
ReplyDeleteAlso, there is a lot of asking in the poem, it adds variety to the poem. Great work!
H.H
I like how you used the flowers' perspective for this poem and used a certain tone that created a suitable theme.
ReplyDeleteHai :) you did really well by writing the poem in a way that shows the hollyhocks are constantly influencing Bill's actions and thoughts. The meaning of the poem is really clear. Good job!
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Awesome Angeni! I like the tone and mood you've created. I think lots of people who wrote the poem in the perspective of the hollyhocks, including me, portrayed them as the "evil voices" that influnced Bill's actions and thoughts. And I agree with Winny that you've done a great job in portraying the theme. Well done!!
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My god, you are a master of poetry, indeed. I applaud you. I like how you wrote from the perspective of the hollyhocks and you did it so well. Brilliant job.
ReplyDeleteC.M